Correction for Sasukegasim

Hey, I hope you're doin' okay.

For the Improvement Club.

I'm not very good at explaining things that's why I don't do these very often, but I hope this helps at least a little.

This is by no means perfect, though.

1.) Overall, I think her expression is very good. It definitely conveys the mood I think you are going for. I know that your style is different from mine, but like I say all the time, it is easier to stylize once you know the basics of realism. I hope that you will be able to incorporate some of my suggestions into whatever style you choose. Like I said, I fail at drawing manga style, so yeah.

2.) You said you wanted help with the chest, shoulders, and head, so those are the areas I tried to focus on. Overall, the body just seems a bit too small for the head, but don't worry, it's a quick fix by making the shoulders broader and lower.

3.) Her boobs are a bit too high on her chest. (If you are a girl and if you have boobs) look in mirror at your own chest and see where on your chest the boobs start. Seriously, it totally helps.

4.) This is just a little thing, but I do like the way you drew the hair, how you got very detailed with the different strands. One suggestion I would give to make it look more lifelike is just to loosen up with your strokes, make the strands a bit more flowy and soft.

Hm yeah, I think that's it for now. If you have any questions, just ask?